Question 1 Summary: Model Answer (CIE IGCSE English Language)

Question 1 is split into two tasks: a comprehension task and a summary task. The summary task will be based on Text B in your reading insert, and is designed to test your ability to secure meaning from what you read, and write fluently and concisely in your own words.

The following guide will demonstrate how to answer the Question 1: Summary question from the June 2022 exam paper. It includes:

• Text B from the June 2022 exam paper
• Question 1(f) Summary model answer
• Unannotated model answer
• Summary

The following text is Text B taken from the June 2022 exam paper. It is about a sporting event called Tough Mudder, which is a long race with obstacles in it.

Below is Question 1(f) from the June 2022 exam paper:

Based on the above question, the following model answer demonstrates how to use continuous writing to summarise information in your own words. It is an example of a full mark answer (15/15):

Model answer: Jayden Dee wanted to take part in this particular event because he likes to show people that he is hardworking and dedicated. He saw the Tough Mudder event as something challenging and original which appealed to his competitive nature. He saw it as different from other endurance events and had become obsessed with the idea of taking part by watching last year’s event on television. He got hooked again on these events by competing in the Ironman competition, and because he felt really fit he thought the timing was right. He was inspired by the fact that a lot of people he looks up to take part in the event, and he wants to become an inspiration himself, representing Redmond and inspiring children from his hometown. Ultimately, he wanted to take part in Tough Mudder because he believed he could win.

Commentary

• The answer demonstrates understanding of both the text and the task
• It remains focused on the task throughout (no unnecessary detail)
• It provides a concise overview of all the main points in the text that answer the question
• The response is well-organised, clear, fluent and written accurately
• It uses the candidate’s own words with well-chosen vocabulary

• Remember to read the question carefully and highlight:
• The instructions (what you have got to do)
• The focus of the question (what you are being asked to write a summary about)
• Remember that up to five marks are awarded in this question for the quality of your writing:
• Therefore, make sure you re-read your answer before moving on to the next question
• It is important that you are able to summarise mostly in your own words - do not just copy and paste from the text, or directly quote from the text
• This answer should be written in paragraph form - do not use bullet points or single words

The full June 2022 exam paper is available here.