Remember, Paper 1 Question 5 is worth 40 marks, broken down into two Assessment Objectives:
AO5 (24 marks)
Communicate clearly, effectively and imaginatively, selecting and adapting tone, style and register for different forms, purposes and audiences
Organise information and ideas, using structural and grammatical features to support coherence and cohesion of texts
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AO6 (16 marks)
Use a range of vocabulary and sentence structures for clarity, purpose and effect, with accurate spelling and punctuation
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When planning your response, it is a good idea to keep the tone, style and register in mind, as well as the conventions of the form. Here, we will consider how you can produce an effective story with these devices in mind:
Tone
Story writing should develop a sense of character as well as mood. This means you should consider how your narrator or characters would behave and sound.
In order to craft a tone which builds characterisation and mood, consider:
- The perspective from which your story will be told:
- First-person characterisation can include monologues which express the narrator’s thoughts and feelings
- Third-person characterisation will generally include a description of the character’s appearance and movements
- Choose verbs and adverbs carefully to ‘show’ the character’s reactions
- If you use a third-person omniscient narrator, you can advise the reader of the character’s thoughts and feelings
- Consider how you can use sentence lengths and types in monologue and dialogue, as well as description of setting:
- Short sentences reflect tension and unease, e.g. ‘No sound could be heard’
- Longer sentences and listing can create a sense of being overwhelmed, or of abundance, e.g. ‘The table was laden with apples, grapes, oranges, loaves of bread, chunks of cheese and an array of colourful vegetables’
- Rhetorical questions can suggest confusion, e.g. ‘Would I ever get it right?’
Style and register
The style of your story writing is closely related to the language you use. For example, in a creative writing response, the best answers show evidence of careful word choice and linguistic techniques.
Creative writing helps the reader to visualise the person, place, or situation being described with word choice and linguistic techniques, as well as being taken on a journey.
The best way to do this is to:
- Use vocabulary which is useful to the reader:
- For example, describing something as ‘great’ or ‘amazing’ is telling rather than showing
- Use sensory language to bring the scene to life:
- For example, a deserted park at night requires a completely different description from a busy park during the daytime
- Emphasise key ideas or impressions using language techniques and imagery:
- For example, you could use a simile to create associations about size or colour
- Personification is a useful technique when describing weather or objects
- Ensure you describe the important details:
- For example, you do not need to describe every inch of a person or scene bit by bit, but instead focus on key, interesting features that develops the story or the sense of character
Form
Creative story writing develops an idea to a conclusion. This means your story should have cohesion by planning an ending with a resolution (you should plan whether your story will end happily or not). In the exam, it is best not to plan a complex story which takes place over a long period of time, employs multiple characters and has more than one setting or plot twist.
In order to adhere to the conventions of story writing, it is best to:
- Plan your writing in an order which takes your character (and reader) on a clear journey:
- The best way to do this is to plan one main event
- Consider employing structural techniques such as a flashback:
- This can give background information to the reader and provide context
- Ensure you use past-tense verbs for this
- Develop your characters:
- Consider essential narrative characterisations, such as villain, victim, hero etc.
- Decide on how your characters fit this description
- When describing people, focus on relevant details only:
- You could focus on their body language or movements
- If using dialogue, how your characters speak can reveal more about them than what they say, e.g. “shrieked”, “mumbled”, “whispered”
- It is effective to repeat ideas related to colour
- You can repeat ideas for emphasis, for example, black and grey or green and blue
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- Focus on using a range of interesting and ambitious vocabulary; words like ‘amazing’ do not accurately describe places or people
- Include descriptive detail using a range of sensory language (sight, texture, sound)
- Ensure your story plot is simple enough to be coherent and cohesive
- Write with technical accuracy (full stops, commas, sentence length, spelling, grammar)
- Vary sentence and paragraph lengths and types to keep the style and tone dynamic
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